“The City Screams” – A Novel That Refused to Be a Short Story

by Feb 26, 2019Novels, Ordshaw Series0 comments

the city screams book cover

My next book now has a release date – and its cover was revealed in an exploration of the Ordshaw style over at Bibliosanctum yesterday. If you didn’t see it coming, that’s fine – The City Screams, officially a full-length novel, even if I keep calling it a novella, came as something of a surprise to me.

Bringing together three separate ideas festering at the back of my mind, I was inspired to write a short story, a light palate-cleanser between Blue Angel and Ordshaw Book 3. It took on a life of its own, though, demanding more. More. More. Today, that supposed-short story might earn the official title of Book 4, even if it’s set to come out before Book 3, and it’ll be available in print. So what on earth is going on?

What’s The City Screams All About?

once in my life, I have a story I can summarise in a sentence: when a profoundly deaf woman travels to
Tokyo for experimental ear surgery, she starts to hear things that she shouldn

It features a new protagonist, Tova Nokes, a council admin out of Ordshaw, deaf from the age of seven. She’s won a lottery for a miracle hearing operation – one too good to be true. She’s left behind loving friends and family, but she won’t be totally alone in Japan. There’s Ki to keep her company. Only she doesn’t know him, or that he’s watching her, and his presence makes things very complicated.

The City Screams is peripherally connected to the main Ordshaw series, with the same thrills and wild twists, but a stand-alone story. Here, the threats are less visible, and the mystery far less easily explained.

The Origins of a Novel

There are two major things going on with Tova’s unfortunate journey – the screaming of the title stems from an unrealised sci-fi/horror short story I wrote a couple of years ago, while our friend Ki comes from a throwaway comment in Blue Angel – a blink-and-you’ll-miss-it moment. I thought, there’s an adventure for Pax. But it’d be a long time before I could give her a holiday to Tokyo; better let someone else take lead on this…

Enter Tova. Her origins lie in the time I spent working researching disabilities for a support app. I was fascinated by the idea of deaf communities, living parallel lives, experiencing the world in a totally different way to me. I wanted to explore that more, and when this idea of a deaf protagonist crept into my mind, it was the perfect way to draw together the twin threads of the Blue Angel reference and that sci-fi story.

It was also a recipe for turning a fortnight’s hapless short story writing into a full novel. Tova’s hearing difficulties didn’t just make the story more complex – it gave me work to do in terms of the nature of her character, what sort of person she was and why. It also led me to trying to get feedback from the Deaf community on what I had created. Which proved more difficult than I anticipated, but I’m thankful for the roads it took me down.

The story not only took far longer than planned, it continually got more complex and bizarre, before I managed to whittle it into the shape it is now. Hopefully accessible, exciting and respectful to its subject matter. Oh, and it also offers hints of insight into what’s still to come for Ordshaw…

I hope you’ll enjoy this next instalment in the Ordshaw universe – even if I say so myself, I think Tova’s been a delight to spend time with, and the story’s one that really swept me away.

The City Screams is out on April 9th, in eBook and paperback format, available for pre-order here.